LG-use paragraphs to organise my ideas.
SOS-use time connectives to order paragraphs.
-use at least 5 persuasive words from list.
-use the audience's name in each paragraph.

         -Introduce argument at the start of each paragraph.
Why you should get a Xbox not a PS4

Boom!! Oh no my PS4 just blew up I never should've chosen sony why didn’t I get a Xbox!!! Hello and I’m here to tell you  three reasons why you should get a Xbox not a PlayStation.

Firstly, we will compare both the Xbox one s and the PS4 graphics. The Xbox one s graphics are 4k ultra HD and on the other hand the PS4 goes for high resolution instead, so for graphics the Xbox come out on top.

Secondly, we will compare the gaming quality. Xbox one’s use windows 10 so while your waiting in a game lobby you can go and do something else like watch youtube or even watch netflix's yes you can watch netflix's also that means they can’t be hacked. Unlike Xbox, with PS4 you have to wait in game lobbies and there’s not one thing you can do about it.

In the paragraphs above I have explained to you their graphics and their gaming quality, So I hope I have convince you that you should get a Xbox not a PS4.