Monday 29th july 2015

a moment of terror

L.G. to sentences that show a moment in time.

S.C. -describe the characters thoughts and feelings

       -describe the characters face and body language

       -describe what the character does

the safety seat slowly slowly rose inch by inch until the size of objects got to no bigger than a child’s toy my body was trembly, my brain yelled get my feet on solid ground. as the machine drop I plumitered my stomach shooted up into my mouth, it felt like I had been pushed in the chest for one hundred and ten meters

By Aiden